A smile,
Envisages the beauty of a flower bud new born,
Blooming with innocence , softening the thorn.
Warms dreariness with cheer and levity,
Brimming the ambience with spontaneous vitality.
Permeates my heart with tender feelings of warmth and affection,
Making my heartstrings resonate with transmissible compassion.
Makes a feeling of bliss and amity cover me then,
Imagining myself in the wonderful garden of Eden,
Gets me out of my melancholy of what transpired before,
Letting my eyes marvel at something they have never seen before.
Reveals the pleasant aroma enfolded within you,
Unfolding a visual miracle,magnificient like you.
Harmonizes the ambivalence in my heart,making my uncogenial emotions reconcile,
Giving me also a reason to smile as I thank you for that beautiful smile!
....written by RT .... 2007
Envisages the beauty of a flower bud new born,
Blooming with innocence , softening the thorn.
Warms dreariness with cheer and levity,
Brimming the ambience with spontaneous vitality.
Permeates my heart with tender feelings of warmth and affection,
Making my heartstrings resonate with transmissible compassion.
Makes a feeling of bliss and amity cover me then,
Imagining myself in the wonderful garden of Eden,
Gets me out of my melancholy of what transpired before,
Letting my eyes marvel at something they have never seen before.
Reveals the pleasant aroma enfolded within you,
Unfolding a visual miracle,magnificient like you.
Harmonizes the ambivalence in my heart,making my uncogenial emotions reconcile,
Giving me also a reason to smile as I thank you for that beautiful smile!
....written by RT .... 2007
cool man...now i know wat u meant when u said u were gud with poetry...not bad at all
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ReplyDeleteI loved these lines " Gets me out of my melancholy of what transpired before,
ReplyDeleteLetting my eyes marvel at something they have never seen before". Spontainity of the rhyme is lucid.
My only suggestion - please write poems with
smaller lines - 4 to 5 words per line.
You have abundant creativity. You can choose topics of natural sorrow and melancholy of humans. keep posting more frequently
warm wishes - Kannan 'Kavithuligal'
Yes Sir!
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